Factors which influence why many young people live in cities.

Young people living in cities 

Nowadays many young people prefer to live in the big cities. There are many factors that have influence on their decision, but the most common are work and education.

It is the job that really matters to all of us and especially to the young generation. They all want a high salary, which will provide them a good and stable life. But as we know the wider range of jobs can be found in the big cities and that is why young people choose to live there.

The other reason, which is really important for students, is the education. Most of the good universities are located in the cities and the young have no choice, because the majority realise that if you want to succeed in the life, you need to have an excellent education.

Also the educational system is better in towns than in villages. A bigger variety of programmes is available and you can have a chance to get an internship, which will be really helpful in the future when you are trying to find a good job.

Of course, there are more reasons like night life, that will always attract the young people to choose the big city than the small one. However, the work and the education will be the most important, because they have a vital importance in the life of all of us.

Content: 3  Two factors — work and education — are discussed but no choice is made as to which is more important (with supporting reasons); the target reader is on the whole informed.

Communicative Achievement: 4  Essay conventions are used with sufficient flexibility to communicate straightforward and complex ideas in an effective way. The register is appropriate.

Organisation: 4  Well organised with clear opening and closing sections. Ideas are presented logically, each paragraph developing a new point. Cohesive devices and organisational patterns, such as referencing, are used naturally and effectively to link ideas within and across paragraphs creating a coherent text. Accurate punctuation.

Language: 3  There is a range of vocabulary, including less common lexis, used appropriately and a range of simple and complex grammatical forms used with control. The occasional errors do not impede communication